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Lights timed to perfection turn on.
It’s a glorious beginning of yet another dawn
This land-locked reef, a world between glass—
Full of color, motion, and creatures ever so vast
Stretches forth it’s beauty to yet plump polyp perfection en masse.

Lights dim down to the soft landing of night
The whirl-some fury of the frenzied day grows quiet.
Sweeping arms search secretly adrift in the flow.
Amongst the gray shadows’ dance
Movement never slows.

Chromatic bliss betrayed by a colorless creation
Soon to return Nature’s wonders amid full anticipation.
 

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This is my reef tank.
This was a wallet that had cash.
I took a picture of the livestock I bought.
It's all I have left because the tank crashed.
 

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Water sloshes from side to side
Blue sun beats down, relentless and timed
Rock grows from earth to meet the sky
And I'm watching it all, a world that's mine.
 

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So when is the winner announced?
Aging Matt Damon GIF
 
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Today is the day that the winner is paid!

Well maybe not paid as I'm not home to ship I'm afraid.

Picked is the word I meant to say but alas it’s still morning and my brain is barely awake.

I’ll choose a winner later this day and then next week I’ll ship and someone will really get paid.

Back to the word paid….dang it!
 

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If I do win this prize
it'll be quite a spade!
Even if I must
Wait to get paid.

I'd love all the swag
That arrives in the mail
I'd wear it for sure
When checking my quail

I'd leave from my house
With the swag on of course
And show all the people
The place for reef recourse

I promise I wrote this
With no dictionary or thesaurus
I just wanted one more
Poem here before us
 

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If I do win this prize
it'll be quite a spade!
Even if I must
Wait to get paid.

I'd love all the swag
That arrives in the mail
I'd wear it for sure
When checking my quail

I'd leave from my house
With the swag on of course
And show all the people
The place for reef recourse

I promise I wrote this
With no dictionary or thesaurus
I just wanted one more
Poem here before us
I'm sorry if you think you will get paid.
But I think his mind is already made.
That something sweet will be in the mail.
It's going to end up in my little pail.
I know you tried with all your heart.
But you have to realize that I'm too smart.
So thank you revtree for the gifts.
Can't wait to try on the new spifs.
 

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I'm sorry if you think you will get paid.
But I think his mind is already made.
That something sweet will be in the mail.
It's going to end up in my little pail.
I know you tried with all your heart.
I you have to realize that I'm too smart.
So thank you revtree for the gifts.
Can't wait to try on the new spifs.
It's like a good old fashioned dance off
Only one of us will get to scoff
Unless of course neither wins
Then we're left with heads that spin
Confused, ashamed, and feeling sad
Just because our rhymes were bad
Good luck my friend I hope you win
Unless I end up with the Reef2Reef pin
 

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I have a sweet swag pack just waiting to be shipped,

It's comprised of t-shirts, stickers, and other stuff that's pretty reefing hip!

In order to get a chance to win you must come up with a rhyme,

But you better hurry though because fourteen days is the time.

So put down some inspirational lines about your reef,

And who knows you might just be crowned the R2R Lyric Chief!

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Roses are red
Corals are salty
Algae is gross
Fish poop tastes like chicken
 

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It's like a good old fashioned dance off
Only one of us will get to scoff
Unless of course neither wins
Then we're left with heads that spin
Confused, ashamed, and feeling sad
Just because our rhymes were bad
Good luck my friend I hope you win
Unless I end up with the Reef2Reef pin
This is great but don't test my fate,
It's the end my old friend.
The rhymes have been good and we all understood, the day has come and it's all undone.
I hope you win, I really do. But I want to also, I bid ado.
Maybe Revtree has a bank roll that's tall? That would be like Christmas for all.
 
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It was so very hard to pick from all of the entries. You all did a fantastic job. But I did decide that I would go ahead and pick two winners.

So congrats @jabberwock and @ReefGenesis for winning! Please PM me to claim your prizes! :p

Thanks again everyone, great job!

An ode to algae, with a line about ich...


Oh Algae, you’re so perplexing.

You’re just trying to do your job.

But if I do not knock you down,

other reefers think me a slob.



The system sure depends on you.

You take the nitrates out.

But if I do not check you,

my watchman goby pouts.



In fact I find you beautiful.

Your colors do abound.

Brown, green, yellow, purple, red.

However, I have found…



Once you take a foot hold,

and of course you do have many,

the next course about my action,

will be a lawnmower blenny!



Still I would have you many times.

You do not make fish sick.

If only it were just as easy,

to free my reef of ICH!!!

Lights timed to perfection turn on.
It’s a glorious beginning of yet another dawn
This land-locked reef, a world between glass—
Full of color, motion, and creatures ever so vast
Stretches forth it’s beauty to yet plump polyp perfection en masse.

Lights dim down to the soft landing of night
The whirl-some fury of the frenzied day grows quiet.
Sweeping arms search secretly adrift in the flow.
Amongst the gray shadows’ dance
Movement never slows.

Chromatic bliss betrayed by a colorless creation
Soon to return Nature’s wonders amid full anticipation.
 

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This is great but don't test my fate,
It's the end my old friend.
The rhymes have been good and we all understood, the day has come and it's all undone.
I hope you win, I really do. But I want to also, I bid ado.
Maybe Revtree has a bank roll that's tall? That would be like Christmas for all.
Another great poem from a reefer named Burr
Although I'm not if it's a him or a her
I guess it's not important regardless of which
But it's been a great time to scratch the poetic itch
We've not had some fun while dropping some rhymes
It's really been fun I'll sure miss these times
I guess one more poem is going to drop
Or maybe a few more can be added on top
Let's keep rolling the fun words til @revhtree does tell
Until that great time the words flow from a well
Deep down inside of the poetic source
I'm talking about Webster's, no doubt but of course!
Just drop some more rhymes and throw words out for fun
It's better and and funner until this things won!
 

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Dr. Suz is now on call
Ready to care for one and all.

We're all a little nutty, you and me.
Perhaps that's why we'd all prefer the sea.
Are we hiding from our anxiety?
Or are we drawn to the simplicity?

Simplicity?
Are you kidding me?
Cue the anxiety...
 

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Dr. Suz is now on call
Ready to care for one and all.

We're all a little nutty, you and me.
Perhaps that's why we'd all prefer the sea.
Are we hiding from our anxiety?
Or are we drawn to the simplicity?

Simplicity?
Are you kidding me?
Cue the anxiety...
Doctor Suz!
 

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